In the Santiago Bernabeu there was a real sense of hope and celebration as fans eagerly awaits the official introduction of their newest ‘Galacticos’. The sound in the stadium was deafening; the incessant drumming, the blaring of horns and the passionate singing of pro-Madrid songs gave the stadium a real carnival atmosphere.
A young fan draped head to toe in Real Madrid gear excitedly exclaimed ‘An angel from heaven is coming to the Bernabeu tonight!’ before kissing a picture of the Patron Saint of Madrid San Isidro.
Suddenly all music and partying stopped as the PA announcer plays the Real Madrid club anthem. The moment has finally arrived; everyone in the stadium held their breath as club president Florentino Perez saunters to the stage on the centre of the pitch. He had a speech prepared which seemed to last a lifetime. But before all hell broke loose amongst the restless crowd ‘El Presidente’ uttered the words all Real fans were dying to hear “It is my pleasure to introduce to you CRISTIANO RONALDO!!!!”
Up until this point Madrid had spent in excess of €150 million on footballing superstars in the form of Kaka, Karim Benzema, Raul Albiol and Xabi Alonso but as the young fan had said this “Angel” was the biggest of them all and the 80000 Madridistas present was a testament to that.
Wearing the crisp white playing strip of Los Merengues Cristiano Ronaldo emerged from the players’ tunnel to rapturous applause. The crowd in unison broke into song lauding his name, cameras from all corners were flashing violently and teenage girls were sent into frenzy as Ronaldo’s pearly whites were shown on the big screen. At that moment Cristiano couldn’t imagine a more glorious moment than the one he was experiencing on that warm summer night; little did he know this was as good as it would get for him.
Today Cristiano Ronaldo is a lowly paid farm labourer in his hometown of
It was not so long ago where Cristiano Ronaldo had the footballing world at his feet. He had impeccable ball control, struck the ball with pinpoint accuracy and his dribbling skill would mesmerize the best defenders. It was at Manchester United where he made a name for himself. Under the tutelage of Sir Alex Ferguson Cristiano Ronaldo spearheaded one of the most successful squad in United’s history winning three consecutive Premier League titles and a European Champions League. So it was inevitable rival clubs would start vying for his services.
Eventually it was Real Madrid which was able to pries Ronaldo away from Old Trafford. Led by the club’s ambitious president
The move to Real Madrid as Ronaldo put it was ‘Fulfilling a Childhood Dream’. However as a child he never imagined the riches that were to be offered to him; a six year contract with a starting salary of £183,000 a week in his first season rising to a staggering £556,000 a week in his final season.
With all the money and adulation being showered on him it was only a matter of time for temptation to follow. And temptations do not come any greater than in the bright lights of
Incensed at Ronaldo’s absence in defense his teammates berated Ronaldo for everyone in the Bernabeu to see. Reacting to the players’ anger fans also started hurling abuse at Ronaldo. The newspapers had a field-day creating headlines like Ronal ‘Dope!’ and ‘What’s RON with you?’ Ronaldo’s
By spending more time on the
The ensuing weeks saw Ronaldo banned from the game for 5 years, he had all his multi-million dollar endorsement deals terminated and experienced a public backlash not seen since George W Bush was in office. Little did he know his legal woes was only just beginning, Florentino Perez ever the astute businessman was intent on recouping the ₤80 million spent on acquiring Ronaldo. Perez successfully sued Ronaldo for breach of contract; the courts found Ronaldo liable for the transfer fee Real Madrid had to write off when they terminated his contract. Financially ruined Ronaldo filed for bankruptcy and returned back to his family home in
Back at Ronaldo’s modest villa, I sit in the dining room with Ronaldo and his two sons as his wife prepares supper. Ronaldo gave a very philosophical response to everything that has happened in past, “I believe everything happens for a reason” he says, “I still believe an injustice was carried out against me, but without this ban and my financial woes I would not have returned to Madeira, I would not have met my loving wife Maria and be a father to two beautiful sons.”
Four years into his five year ban I ask whether he missed playing football. His reply was an emphatic YES! He mentioned that in his spare time he would go to the town’s local football club and coach the youngsters for a few hours. As we strolled around town I asked whether he may consider playing when his ban expires, at that moment a football from a nearby pickup game rolled towards us, he performed a spectacular juggling act before kicking the ball back, turned to me with a cheeky grin and replied “We’ll see”.
The sparkle in his eyes was back.
An eloquently written piece on an icon of European football. Johnny with an obvious keen interest in the sport depicts Ronaldo's life from the initial transfer throught to a fictional end. The transfer for those who are followers of the sport was so well covered in the media and speculation was rife. Written from a live reporting perspective I feel this piece provides a real theoretical possibility of future events. Well we will wait and see.
ReplyDeleteI must say, I have to agree with Alex.
ReplyDeleteInitially, I perceived 'A Dive from Grace' to be like a biography of Cristiano Ronaldo's life somewhat. It wasn't until I started to read in more depth did I realise it was taken from a live reporters' stance.
From someone who is neither passionate or 'in-the-know' about football, I find your fanfic to be informative. I also like how this particular piece allows room for capturing the readers' attention; I am able to visualise what is happening as the story unfolds. For me, I think it makes the story THAT much better to follow.
We will have to see what happens in the next episode...
I harbour an intense dislike of this Cristiano Ronaldo in real life, so a chance to see that punk knee-deep in shit was fantastic. Without an interest in the so-called "Beautiful Game" (how is a game, wherein grown-men kick some balls around a pitch, in any way "beautiful"), I found your descriptions to be both insightful and knowledgeable. Although, you did miss some commas and spelt maybe three words wrong, I find it hard to critique your work. However, I think the story needs more excitement, more drama to really stir the pot. The stadium atmosphere was accurately portrayed, you included some field-based theatrics - but, ultimately, not a lot else. I'm not sure whether this is draft work or a completed text, but I recommend you give it another go-round to shape the prose a little more. This could add serious weight to the piece and give much-needed pizzaz. Still, I enjoyed it, and you've obviously got writing chops, holding interest even in those with no love of soccer. Not an easy thing to do, mind you.
ReplyDeleteI found your piece to really open up my eyes to the world of competitive football. Not knowing much about the topic your passion is really felt throughout the piece and gives the reader a sense of what it must mean to you.
ReplyDeleteI liked the point of view which it was written and how the end of the story was left open to see what happens next.
It was a real-life story of how even the great can fall with the idea that everything may indeed happen for a reason. Really looking forward to see what the final outcome is.
Wow i thought your piece would be like a biography or something but reading on i really got into it. I didnt know much about this iconic football player and all i knew was that he was really good. So you must really love football to have written about Renaldo. I really liked the way it was written and also i think it really shows that if you let fame get to your head so much it can mean some bad conseqences. Cant wait for the final outcome.
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